My story features characters from different racial backgrounds so that should distinguish it from others stories right?
Dragon Kamaris: Legend of the Black Dragon is an ongoing American manga series written and illustrated by Robert Tate and Sokhorn Tem. The plot tells the story of Jelani Toteh, an arrogant teenage ninja, who searches for the assassins responsible for killing his master. He soon discovers that he is the prophesied “Black Dragon” destined to bring the 3 Nations back to peace.
Plot
Twenty years before the start of the series, the Four Dragons (Aku, Gia, Naga, Hajj) were the protectors of the world. They were the wisest and most powerful creatures on Earth and they had two human students; The Sanari brothers; Onu and Kayo. They taught the brothers many fighting techniques and helped them to develop their amazing powers. Kayo the younger brother became jealous of Onu’s popularity and fast learning and desired to be the most powerful and feared ninja. He was encouraged to find a magic amulet said to be able to control the Four Dragons and when he found it he put it to use. The amulet instead killed the Dragons and the 3 Unified Nations split and went to war for ten years. Twenty years later Kayo (now calling himself Lord Natas) is planning an attack on the other Nations for complete control of the world, but the prophecy fortells of the “Black Dragon” a powerful ninja that will rise up and bring peace back to the world.
The main story follows Jelani and his friends' personal growth and development as ninjas, and emphasizes their interactions with each other and the influence of their backgrounds on their personalities. Jelani finds a friend and comrade in Akira Li a fellow young ninja who is the only person that can tolerate his cocky personality. Jelani also befriends other characters such as Hania, Asir Lara, and his love interest Princess Amaya. They learn new abilities, get to know each other and experience a coming-of-age journey.
His search for the murderers of his Master lead him to a assassin organization called Demon Dragons. He learns that all but one of the original members have been killed. The surviving member is a girl named Imani who lives in the Tiger Nation. After learning of her identity he decides to head to the Tiger Nation for revenge but is stopped by an old man who tells him his destiny is much greater than that. The old man introduces himself as Master Onu Sanari and he tells Jelani and the gang of his brother Lord Natas and the need to defeat him. He says that Jelani is the prophesied “Black Dragon” and that only he can defeat Natas and bring peace back to the world. Jelani is uninterested intially but soon goes on a journey with his friends to find a mythical trainer that will help him fufill his destiny.
Setting
The world of Dragon Kamaris consists of three Nations (Countries) Tiger, Eagle, and Cobra. Each Nation is ruled by a King and Queen and include cities and villages and Forests; the White (Magic), Green (Plant Life), and Blue (Water). Each Nation has a Ninja Academy where they train men/boys and women/girls. Before the split they held annual tournaments.
I know it sounds kinda familiar but it's still good right?OTHER than Naruto does my story sound too familiar to any current or past mangas or anime?
it's the typical shonen battle manga. it has similarities to blue dragon beet the vandel buster avatar too many seperations with out similarities in order to have more sections have them go along together using myths is always good to string plots together it is a good start though with a little tweeks it can be very promising also don't use groups of three i say use more or less either way is betterOTHER than Naruto does my story sound too familiar to any current or past mangas or anime?
easy, blue dragonOTHER than Naruto does my story sound too familiar to any current or past mangas or anime?
kinda sounds like avatar? i guess
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